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17 replies · 8476 views · Started by Riley · May 2004
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
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· May 2004
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I'm feelin u.
P o e t i q R e i g n · May 2004
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tru2daheart wrote:
I'm feelin u.
cosign, I was feelin' the whole thing...but it all, these lines are my favorite...
Riley Freeman wrote:
I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust
I can relate to them so much...
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· May 2004
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thanks for the feedback
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In Rod We Trust · May 2004
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Ayo man that some real hot shyt. Im willin to bet everybody on the site can relate to this in some way or another
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· May 2004
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Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
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Wisdom_Tree · May 2004
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ChoklatPoet wrote:
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
Oh REALLY Tya? *leaves, shakin his head*
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In Rod We Trust · May 2004
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i'm glad you ha a change of life. we need more eduated brothers, the ratio of males to females is terribly off. :wink:
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shanise94 · May 2004
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Im definately feelin u...that hit close to home man. That was hot though
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· May 2004
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ChoklatPoet wrote:
Riley Freeman wrote:
Don't know wether to call it a rap, poetry or just words on paper but this is somethin' i wrote awhile ago before i decided to go back to school... I could have blamed my father, But I knew I was failing myself Cuz only thing i was into was sellin' the melt couldn't talk to nobody, about the the hell that i felt so i walked with a .38 and extra shells by my belt I had click...If u crossed them, you crossed us then they crossed me so i lost friends and lost trust almost got robbed, reached for the gun and he bust I got grazed...so i cocked back and he got shot in the leg My whole life growing up, i knew alot for my age I stopped dukin' it out and became accustomed to shootouts Couldn't live by rules, so i left mom dukes house never meant to hurt her, but i just had to let the truth out I ran the streets wild, seemed like they had adopted me i fvcked up my flip money, i was playin' the game sloppily got back on top and older females started jockin' me the sooner i got my weight up, the more they felt like lockin' me but a couple months I got free, Bettered my knowledge position started putting the drug money towards my college tuition conversated with god and got more involved in religion
Will you be my husband lol
:lol: :lol:
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