Untitled by ME....ms. Rosie *snap snap snap* ya fingers

22 replies · 13448 views · Started by RosieKisses · Jul 2004
RosieKisses QUEENS, NY
I never had this feeling, I have so much pain inside. Can't seem to understand it, and it's so hard to hide. How could I be so foolish? How could I run away? Why did i get so scared, and not listen to what they had to say? I saw my life flash before my eyes, would my freedom end like this? How fast a child could be created, By one single kiss. Will I regret for the rest of my life? Or will I just brush it off? Can I seriously answer these questions, cause I'll never hear my baby cough. I felt as if a piece of me died that day, How dumb on my part. If I could control my past, I'd rewind or press restart. I was so selfish and only thought of myself, I hurt all those around me, and even hurt my own health. If I could bring back the baby that I let go, my heart wouldnt hurt as much, and my child would know love, the way that i know.... ok after reading the last few lines over and over and over and over and over..im not too sure if it's right...but oh well :?
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· Aug 2004
#11 Reply
be strong chan....hold it in.... :cry:...that was deep
RosieKisses · Aug 2004
#12 Reply
thanks guys... chan ::hugs:: it'll be ok
In Rod We Trust · Aug 2004
#13 Reply
Rosie....that's tight.....I like it....it feels so real, like I was there....
· Aug 2004
#14 Reply
RosieKisses wrote:
thanks guys... chan ::hugs:: it'll be ok
WHY LAWD WHY?? DON'T TAKE HER LAWD TAKE ME...SHE DON'T NEED TO GO...LAWD, LAWD, LAWD!!!!!! ok...thanks for the hug rosie...CBC4LIFE :lol:
The Big Girl Sweetz · Aug 2004
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::gives rosie a big hug:: :cry: Poetry wise...that was beautiful...the pain...the emotion...its there... On the other hand...girl...let me give you another big hug...::hugs her:: Its love Rosie...all love :wink:
jadekiss · Aug 2004
#16 Reply
:cry: that was.....that was beautiful.... No...I have to go....
RosieKisses · Aug 2004
#17 Reply
thanks guys !
G.O.M.A.B. · Aug 2004
#18 Reply
[will be back with comment]
RosieKisses · Aug 2004
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Taye~All~Day wrote:
[will be back with comment]
::scared about what his comment might be::: :?
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G.O.M.A.B. · Aug 2004
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RosieKisses wrote:
Taye~All~Day wrote:
[will be back with comment]
::scared about what his comment might be::: :?
well....miss ROSEANNA.....that poem had me like ---you (me) dont know what a person has been through until you hear their story.....that was deep.....
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