That cheatin', lyin' b*tch

17 replies · 8257 views · Started by Kool 2k6 · Aug 2004
Women, dont get offended but, when i wrote this, i was in an uncontrollable rage (and i had been drinking like prohibition's next week). I'm a beginner to this poetry thing but, here goes. That cheatin, lying, b*tch. I should've know the day i looked in your eyes That your mind was full of ****, deceit and lies But all i could focus on was your face, & those thighs I feel like a fool. All because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I worked odd hours, never got much sleep Made good money, so i couldn't be called cheap If i gave you something, i wanted you to keep But now im outraged, because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I sacraficed friendships, bonds and connections And my mind was all in the wrong direction I thought that was love **** out of this ****.... Because of that cheating, lying, no-good b*tch. I found out the truth, can't believe i trusted your jive My best friend really is my .45 Meet Mister Mossberg, you dirty, filthy **** Women are never to be trusted no more Im about to get locked up for sure..... Because of that cheatin, lyin' no-good, slutty, sum-b*tch
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· Oct 2004
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Dr. Ash wrote:
lol, I could just see some brotha doing this poem in front of his ex and feeling good as hell when he's done.....glad ya got it off ya chest.
^^Me too
· Oct 2004
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*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
Awwwww....woo woo woo. It's gonna be alright baby. Come ere son. Lay your head on momma's ****
Here I am......*sniff---hehehe---sniff*
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Perseverance · Oct 2004
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Dang, I didn't know she was like that! But I was feeling that poem, though.
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Blutifully Human · Oct 2004
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Da Kool™ Iz Back wrote:
*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
Awwwww....woo woo woo. It's gonna be alright baby. Come ere son. Lay your head on momma's ****
Here I am......*sniff---hehehe---sniff*
:idea: hmmmm...why do i strangely feel as tho i'm being used?
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AfroPoeticSista · Oct 2004
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Da Kool™ Iz Back wrote:
Women, dont get offended but, when i wrote this, i was in an uncontrollable rage (and i had been drinking like prohibition's next week). I'm a beginner to this poetry thing but, here goes. That cheatin, lying, b*tch. I should've know the day i looked in your eyes That your mind was full of ****, deceit and lies But all i could focus on was your face, & those thighs I feel like a fool. All because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I worked odd hours, never got much sleep Made good money, so i couldn't be called cheap If i gave you something, i wanted you to keep But now im outraged, because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I sacraficed friendships, bonds and connections And my mind was all in the wrong direction I thought that was love **** out of this ****....<that was deepBecause of that cheating, lying, no-good b*tch. I found out the truth, can't believe i trusted your jive My best friend really is my .45 Meet Mister Mossberg, you dirty, filthy **** Women are never to be trusted no more Im about to get locked up for sure..... Because of that cheatin, lyin' no-good, slutty, sum-b*tch
for some reason the format of this poem reminds me of this poem i saw on Comicview "I thought I had a winner, but man, she's just a sinner, I can't watch TV cuz she's SMOKIN THE ANTENNAEEEEEE... cuz i'm in looooove wit a crackhead"
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Blutifully Human · Oct 2004
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AfroPoeticSista wrote:
Da Kool™ Iz Back wrote:
Women, dont get offended but, when i wrote this, i was in an uncontrollable rage (and i had been drinking like prohibition's next week). I'm a beginner to this poetry thing but, here goes. That cheatin, lying, b*tch. I should've know the day i looked in your eyes That your mind was full of ****, deceit and lies But all i could focus on was your face, & those thighs I feel like a fool. All because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I worked odd hours, never got much sleep Made good money, so i couldn't be called cheap If i gave you something, i wanted you to keep But now im outraged, because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I sacraficed friendships, bonds and connections And my mind was all in the wrong direction I thought that was love **** out of this ****....<that was deepBecause of that cheating, lying, no-good b*tch. I found out the truth, can't believe i trusted your jive My best friend really is my .45 Meet Mister Mossberg, you dirty, filthy **** Women are never to be trusted no more Im about to get locked up for sure..... Because of that cheatin, lyin' no-good, slutty, sum-b*tch
for some reason the format of this poem reminds me of this poem i saw on Comicview "I thought I had a winner, but man, she's just a sinner, I can't watch TV cuz she's SMOKIN THE ANTENNAEEEEEE... cuz i'm in looooove wit a crackhead"
:lol: :lol: :lol: ...i remember that one
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jadekiss · Oct 2004
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*PURE*Kindnezz wrote:
AfroPoeticSista wrote:
Da Kool™ Iz Back wrote:
Women, dont get offended but, when i wrote this, i was in an uncontrollable rage (and i had been drinking like prohibition's next week). I'm a beginner to this poetry thing but, here goes. That cheatin, lying, b*tch. I should've know the day i looked in your eyes That your mind was full of ****, deceit and lies But all i could focus on was your face, & those thighs I feel like a fool. All because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I worked odd hours, never got much sleep Made good money, so i couldn't be called cheap If i gave you something, i wanted you to keep But now im outraged, because of that cheatin, lying, b*tch. I sacraficed friendships, bonds and connections And my mind was all in the wrong direction I thought that was love **** out of this ****....<that was deepBecause of that cheating, lying, no-good b*tch. I found out the truth, can't believe i trusted your jive My best friend really is my .45 Meet Mister Mossberg, you dirty, filthy **** Women are never to be trusted no more Im about to get locked up for sure..... Because of that cheatin, lyin' no-good, slutty, sum-b*tch
for some reason the format of this poem reminds me of this poem i saw on Comicview "I thought I had a winner, but man, she's just a sinner, I can't watch TV cuz she's SMOKIN THE ANTENNAEEEEEE... cuz i'm in looooove wit a crackhead"
:lol: :lol: :lol: ...i remember that one
Didnt' that Cole B. guy do that poem? That's ish was funny
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